InvisibleObserver's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Long Wait For Death]

Shoop

3 minutes isn't long unless you want this to be on the radio 30 years ago.

I find this to be calming.

Instruments all 'fit'

Towards 1:40 when the guitar picks up it really kicks off, and the electric guitar is wicked. Its not everyday that you hear music like this (especially on NG).

I think the ending should build a bit more with the electric and have a more conclusive ending, which could be done in 5-10 seconds of additional play time.

I approve.

PIED3 responds:

Thanks, im glad that everyone liked the guitar, i wasn't sure if it would fit but it seems to be a hit! Thanks for all the reviews!

[From the deep blue sea.]

Don't lick concrete

I feel like I opened a can and out poured condensed Pippi-Long Stocking. (A feeling I thought only existed in dreams)

This is a very nice melody and definitely has a sing-a-long kind of feel, its very catchy, but not in an annoying sort of way.

I would recommend making the accompanying piano have some dynamics so it follows the tune a bit more, perhaps soften them.

Also if the silence at the end was trimmed near the end, NG users could make use of this.

Very nice, high five.

PIED3 responds:

Wow, thanks for the review, seeing as ive got such a good response to this i might add to it then i guess! Thanks for reviewing!

[Fat pips and razor slides]

Don't eat batteries.

And sounding basic isn't bad.

Any one listening can tell that your new to making music, and it does sound as if some presets were used. Most people will tell you thats a bad thing, but as far as I'm concerned, you've done what it takes to make something appropriate to your skill level, that sounds good. Its that trait which in my mind sets apart the people who have some skill in this business from those who just throw stuff together hoping it turns out ok.

Keep it up, dabble in the world of music some more.

On a side note... Lenkobiscuits comment made me "Lol".

Torm responds:

Thank you for the positive comment, as you know i've not spend much time making music yet but I enjoyed using the program so much I'd love to practice more. I like logic pro but don't own a mac so I'd like to know what software you would recommend as a PC counterpart? Thanks.
Also on lenko's comment, he is on the same course as me at uni and is just trying to annoy me because I like NIN. lol

[DJ Sumara - Drift]

Doesn't vary much

Pretty cool, feels like it could fit in a sci-fi racing game. Like most house-oriented techno though, it doesn't vary too much throughout the course of the song. The snare around 2:40 sounds like it desperately needs some dynamics, even for techno, its too robotic in my opinion, and it stuck out to me. Overall though this is really nicely put together, and its great hearing good things from FL users.

KrisSumara responds:

Yea i had some problems EQ'ing this song a bit, but i did what i can with it, im still learning how to EQ properly and how to tie all the sounds in togetther