Dough head
Piano and string instruments are nice, its like a more fast paced Mr.Rogers theme song, with a hip-hop kind of beat.
Which is good.
Get a handle on using some effects to make everything come together better. The main melody synth that comes in and out is a bit honky-midi in general sound, which in my mind is this songs weak point.
Overall song build is quite good, no complaints there, though 5:30 may have been 45 seconds longer then may have been good for this peice, unless you intend on changing around some of the later melody.
Keep this up, its easy listening.