My review, your drawing.
Pretty sweet, got a lot of NG-ish themes all worked in there without mistake.
The only thing I think that would drastically improve it is some use of shading to make your layering already evident stand out more to add more depth into the image. Basically having them on some sort of plane or ground, adding shadows as well as on the letters themselves, like nears the "oun".
Recommended for art portal.
Thanks and remember, your songs are awesome :)
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